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 Installing scientific software for supercomputers is typically a tedious, time-consuming task (especially as the
 HPC user community becomes more diverse, computational science expands, system architecture diversity increases, the
 application software stack deepens and interest in cloud computing for scientific research surges).
-Delivering optimised software installations and providing access to them reliably and reproducibly
-is a highly non-trivial task impacting application developers, HPC user support teams, and the users themselves.
+Delivering optimised software installations, and providing access to them reliably and reproducibly,
+is a highly non-trivial task impacting application developers, HPC user support, and users themselves.
 
-This tutorial aims provide the attendees with the knowledge to stream optimized scientific software.
+This tutorial will show attendees how they can stream optimized scientific software instead.
 The tutorial introduces the European Environment for Scientific Software Installations (\emph{EESSI}), a collaboration
 between European HPC sites \& industry partners, with the common goal of creating a shared repository of scientific
 software installations usable on a variety of systems, regardless of Linux flavour or processor architecture, or

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 \subsection*{Travel support}
-The tutorial presenters request travel support for two presenters from Europe
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+The tutorial presenters request travel support for two presenters from Europe.
 
 The tutorial presenters, and assistants if possible, also request free passes for their tutorial.