Merge pull request #1066 from ethereum-optimism/opmxwell-patch-7

Update welcome-overview.mdx

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 ### Decentralization Milestone Working Model
 
-The [Optimism Decentralization Milestone Working Model](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1IpL0oTd3AgNBu_eWdjP9EjbQfZjq-_Nd3yU1H2ke3vY/edit?gid=0#gid=0) outlines general steps the Collective ecosystem can take on its journey towards ever-increasing levels of decentralization and governance minimization. It is **not** a roadmap, but rather a working model outlining the path the Foundation currently envisions. The actual path may deviate in response to dynamic conditions and execution that depends on contributions from a wide variety of contributors across the Collective. This model is meant to be directional, rather than prescriptive. 
+The [Optimism Decentralization Milestone Working Model](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1IpL0oTd3AgNBu_eWdjP9EjbQfZjq-_Nd3yU1H2ke3vY/edit?gid=0#gid=0) is a working model that demonstrates the Foundation’s thinking about the major decentralization milestones, their dependencies, and the work necessary to be done to move from one phase to the next. This model is directional, rather than prescriptive.
 
 ### Decision Diagram Working Model
 
-The [Optimism Decision Diagram Working Model](https://www.figma.com/board/iXqyKmLJeBeplKpJBHDI7G/PUBLIC%3A-Optimism-Decision-Diagram-Working-Model?node-id=0-1&node-type=canvas&t=QLiz1uM1DepwYyHy-0) is advisory in nature: it provides guidance to the community on how the Foundation considers various decision pathways across the Collective, and is intended to inform - but not define - the governance community’s decision-making processes. Working models are intended to preserve flexibility, and allow the community to collaborate in testing, adapting, and evolving them over time.

+The [Optimism Decision Diagram Working Model](https://www.figma.com/board/iXqyKmLJeBeplKpJBHDI7G/PUBLIC%3A-Optimism-Decision-Diagram-Working-Model?node-id=0-1&node-type=canvas&t=QLiz1uM1DepwYyHy-0) is a working model of the full decision making surface area of Optimism governance, demonstrating how these decisions interrelate and providing a framework for how these decisions might be designed. This diagram represents the full self-managing system in the end state. This diagram is advisory in nature, and is not prescriptive.