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Rewriting Introduction #25

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This is my branch where I am rewriting the introduction. I am about half way through at the moment. Here are some notes related to the work:

  • Removing "we" as much as possible and using "I" or "you" or "one".
  • Changing code references from Processing to p5.js.
  • Changing language discussion from Java to JavaScript.
  • General edits and clarifications etc. as I notice.
  • Filing of issues for things to revisit later.

I will merge this when I complete my pass over the chapter.

It should also be noted that for this to work properly, a commit of the original document as left off in noc-book should be done before any edits are made. See nature-of-code/noc-book-2#24 and nature-of-code/noc-book-2#23 (old version of this pull request).

@shiffman shiffman self-assigned this Jun 25, 2019
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😂😂😂

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I changed a lot of whitespace so that diff is not rendering. . . oh well, this one is "ok" for now, I'll be more careful next time or will consider redoing again once I'm finished this pass.

@shiffman shiffman changed the title [WIP] Rewriting Introduction Rewriting Introduction Jun 26, 2019
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I've completed this first pass over the introduction. Left to do are:

Merging!

@shiffman shiffman merged commit 4f9a8f4 into source Jun 26, 2019
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