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-You might have noticed that a [new tutorial](https://docs.near.org/tutorials/auction/introduction) has been added to the docs! This multi-part tutorial is all about learning to build full applications on NEAR. In this tutorial you will build an auction application from start to finish including building the smart contract, deploying it on chain, and building a front end to interact with it.
+You might have noticed that a [new tutorial](https://docs.near.org/tutorials/auction/introduction) has been added to the docs! This multi-part series is all about learning to build full applications on NEAR; you will see how to build an on chain auction from start to finish including the smart contract, deploying it on chain, and creating a frontend to interact with it.
 
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-Along the way you will learn several concepts and how to use many key primitives along the way: 
+Along the way you will learn several key concepts and how to use many key primitives along the way: 
 - Creating a simple smart contract
 - Writing tests for a contract
 - Deploying a contract to testnet
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 - Using Fungible Tokens
 - Modifying a factory contract to deploy your own contracts
 
-This tutorial is a great place to start for beginners to follow all the way through, but each section can also be used as a reference guide for different concepts. if you have any feedback or any questions regarding the tutorial please feel free to reach out in the [Developer Telegram Channel](https://t.me/neardev). 
+This tutorial is a great for beginners to follow all the way through, but each section can also be used as a reference guide for different concepts. If you have any feedback or any questions regarding the tutorial please feel free to reach out in the [Developer Telegram Channel](https://t.me/neardev). 
 
 **Start the tutorial [here](https://docs.near.org/tutorials/auction/introduction)**