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performant-software · Aug 13, 2024 · d182834 · d182834
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diff --git a/astro-web/src/components/FeatureTabs.tsx b/astro-web/src/components/FeatureTabs.tsx
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ const FeatureTabs = () => {
                             Supports multiple transcriptions and translations
                         </h3>
                         <p className="text-neutral-gray">
-                            An edition can comprise multiple renditions of a source text, including transcriptions, normalized transcriptions, and translations. Through styling, it supports discontinuous text, inline figures, and special characters, EditionCrafter provides tools for precise transcription and translation.                        
+                            An edition can comprise multiple renditions of a source text, including transcriptions, normalized transcriptions, and translations. Through styling, it supports discontinuous text, inline figures, and special characters. EditionCrafter provides tools for precise transcription and translation.                        
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diff --git a/astro-web/src/pages/index.astro b/astro-web/src/pages/index.astro
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@ import elygreen from '../assets/projects/thumbnails/elygreen.png';
 	<Hero>
 		<div class="flex flex-col gap-y-6">
 			<h1 class="font-serif text-5xl">
-				A simple digital critical edition publication tool
+				A simple digital edition publication tool
 			</h1>
 			<p class="text-neutral-gray">
-				EditionCrafter is an easy-to-use tool for scholars, educators, and research institutions to publish digital critical editions in a low-cost and sustainable manner.
+				EditionCrafter is an easy-to-use tool for scholars, educators, and research institutions to publish digital editions in a low-cost and sustainable manner.
 			</p>
 			<div class="flex flex-row w-full justify-between">
 				<Button href="/editioncrafter/getting-started">
@@ -43,15 +43,15 @@ import elygreen from '../assets/projects/thumbnails/elygreen.png';
 				About EditionCrafter
 			</h2>
 			<p class="text-2xl">
-				An open source and customizable publishing tool, EditionCrafter allows users to easily publish digital critical editions as feature-rich and sustainable static sites.
+				An open source and customizable publishing tool, EditionCrafter allows users to easily publish digital editions as feature-rich and sustainable static sites.
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 					<p>
 						EditionCrafter was developed as a collaboration between the Making and Knowing Project and Performant Software Solutions to address the need for a scholarly publication tool that integrates primary sources, commentary, and textual analysis.
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-						As a publication tool, EditionCrafter facilitates the dissemination of original research through the creation of a digital critical edition of a text. Researchers, students, and institutions such as libraries, historical societies, archives, and community groups can grant public access to valuable textual sources across disciplines.
+						As a publication tool, EditionCrafter facilitates the dissemination of original research through the creation of a digital edition of a text. Researchers, students, and institutions such as libraries, historical societies, archives, and community groups can grant public access to valuable textual sources across disciplines.
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